soggy

Posted under whatever by Laura on Saturday 17 April 2010 at 9:15 pm

Chapters 1 and 2 are fine. Chapters 6 and 7 are fine. Chapters 8, 9, and 10 are in pieces, but have potential, and will probably end up fine.

But chapters 3-5 are not fine. They feel like soggy bread, you know, like when a bit of sandwich crust ends up in the dirty dishes?

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