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		<title>By: Courtney</title>
		<link>http://lauraraeamos.com/2010/01/05/did-i-say-that-out-loud/comment-page-1/#comment-18145</link>
		<dc:creator>Courtney</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jan 2010 16:06:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>We have very similar goals for 2010! I am on my fifth day of phase one of south beach - so far, so good - haven&#039;t weighed myself thus far. I know what you mean about carbs...even with celiacs you can still eat a lot of calories in potatoes and rice and ice cream, LOL. So south beach it is for me, too - and of course, the novel writing -</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We have very similar goals for 2010! I am on my fifth day of phase one of south beach &#8211; so far, so good &#8211; haven&#8217;t weighed myself thus far. I know what you mean about carbs&#8230;even with celiacs you can still eat a lot of calories in potatoes and rice and ice cream, LOL. So south beach it is for me, too &#8211; and of course, the novel writing -</p>
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		<title>By: Laura</title>
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		<dc:creator>Laura</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 18:54:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;b&gt;Shana,&lt;/b&gt; I think that&#039;s how most people write, seat of their pants, from beginning to end for the first draft.  I feel like a very strange mutant of a writer sometimes because I never ever write anything in order - not a novel, not a short story, not a blog entry, not even this comment!  The very first thing I wrote for my current novel was what is expected to become chapter 21 ;)

I guess maybe that pre-draft of random scenes and notes is kind of like what most people write for their first draft?  Because then (the stage I&#039;m in now), I go through from beginning to end rearranging, plumping, filling in the blanks, and polishing all that mess I spewed out the first time through.

It&#039;s weird maybe, but it makes for a pretty polished first draft :)

I think you&#039;re right about learning to work under pressure, since I guess your first novel is the only one you really have the luxury of letting sit for however long you want, since all the novels after it will probably have deadlines.  I like deadlines anyway.  I&#039;m too lazy and unaccountable without them, even if they&#039;re just deadlines I&#039;ve given myself... and announced to the public, of course ;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><b>Shana,</b> I think that&#8217;s how most people write, seat of their pants, from beginning to end for the first draft.  I feel like a very strange mutant of a writer sometimes because I never ever write anything in order &#8211; not a novel, not a short story, not a blog entry, not even this comment!  The very first thing I wrote for my current novel was what is expected to become chapter 21 <img src='http://lauraraeamos.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I guess maybe that pre-draft of random scenes and notes is kind of like what most people write for their first draft?  Because then (the stage I&#8217;m in now), I go through from beginning to end rearranging, plumping, filling in the blanks, and polishing all that mess I spewed out the first time through.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s weird maybe, but it makes for a pretty polished first draft <img src='http://lauraraeamos.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I think you&#8217;re right about learning to work under pressure, since I guess your first novel is the only one you really have the luxury of letting sit for however long you want, since all the novels after it will probably have deadlines.  I like deadlines anyway.  I&#8217;m too lazy and unaccountable without them, even if they&#8217;re just deadlines I&#8217;ve given myself&#8230; and announced to the public, of course <img src='http://lauraraeamos.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Shana</title>
		<link>http://lauraraeamos.com/2010/01/05/did-i-say-that-out-loud/comment-page-1/#comment-18140</link>
		<dc:creator>Shana</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 17:37:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My problem is that I&#039;m a boredom eater. I&#039;ll eat anytime I feel bored, even if I consciously know I&#039;m not hungry. So I have to keep myself busy with a lot of hobbies. ;)

I have the Wii Fit, but honestly, the delay between exercises drives me crazy and so I don&#039;t use it very often except when I feel like I need to do some yoga. Instead I use EA Sports Active (which works with the balance board from Wii Fit) and Your Shape (which I absolutely love!) along with my treadmill for my workouts. Haven&#039;t ever tried The Shred, but I can say that Your Shape made me realize that some of my muscles weren&#039;t getting any attention from the treadmill and Sports Active, LOL. I hobbled around for three days before my legs recovered from the first workout with Your Shape.

I can&#039;t let anyone read my drafts until after I&#039;ve completed the first one and have revised it at least once on my own because I&#039;m a &quot;seat of my pants&quot; writer, meaning that I rarely ever outline or think too far ahead. I discover the story as I write it and so my first draft is VERY messy and doesn&#039;t make sense at all because I&#039;ll change my mind about something halfway through and instead of fixing the earlier chapters I just keep writing and fix it during revisions. I have an online critique group I put together but they only get to read the second or later drafts, never the first because it would make their heads explode trying to figure it out. ;) 

I&#039;ve always heard and read that drafts should be put away for several months, but I&#039;ve revised much sooner than that several times. When you&#039;re under contract and on a deadline you don&#039;t always get the luxury of waiting (I had to write and revise my second book in just one month before sending it in for my editor&#039;s read through!), so I think teaching yourself to revise quickly is a good thing. But I also think you kind of know when to revise--or at least I do. :) I&#039;ll put the story away for a while and when my brain starts thinking about it again and my fingers are itching to work on it, I know it&#039;s time to pick it back up.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My problem is that I&#8217;m a boredom eater. I&#8217;ll eat anytime I feel bored, even if I consciously know I&#8217;m not hungry. So I have to keep myself busy with a lot of hobbies. <img src='http://lauraraeamos.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I have the Wii Fit, but honestly, the delay between exercises drives me crazy and so I don&#8217;t use it very often except when I feel like I need to do some yoga. Instead I use EA Sports Active (which works with the balance board from Wii Fit) and Your Shape (which I absolutely love!) along with my treadmill for my workouts. Haven&#8217;t ever tried The Shred, but I can say that Your Shape made me realize that some of my muscles weren&#8217;t getting any attention from the treadmill and Sports Active, LOL. I hobbled around for three days before my legs recovered from the first workout with Your Shape.</p>
<p>I can&#8217;t let anyone read my drafts until after I&#8217;ve completed the first one and have revised it at least once on my own because I&#8217;m a &#8220;seat of my pants&#8221; writer, meaning that I rarely ever outline or think too far ahead. I discover the story as I write it and so my first draft is VERY messy and doesn&#8217;t make sense at all because I&#8217;ll change my mind about something halfway through and instead of fixing the earlier chapters I just keep writing and fix it during revisions. I have an online critique group I put together but they only get to read the second or later drafts, never the first because it would make their heads explode trying to figure it out. <img src='http://lauraraeamos.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />  </p>
<p>I&#8217;ve always heard and read that drafts should be put away for several months, but I&#8217;ve revised much sooner than that several times. When you&#8217;re under contract and on a deadline you don&#8217;t always get the luxury of waiting (I had to write and revise my second book in just one month before sending it in for my editor&#8217;s read through!), so I think teaching yourself to revise quickly is a good thing. But I also think you kind of know when to revise&#8211;or at least I do. <img src='http://lauraraeamos.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  I&#8217;ll put the story away for a while and when my brain starts thinking about it again and my fingers are itching to work on it, I know it&#8217;s time to pick it back up.</p>
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		<title>By: Laura</title>
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		<dc:creator>Laura</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 16:08:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;b&gt;Mao,&lt;/b&gt; I definitely feel more motivated with a good solid plan.  It&#039;s like giving myself an assignment or something.  I can&#039;t keep myself accountable otherwise.

What is it with these men and their stripper poles? :)

&lt;b&gt;Carnaxa,&lt;/b&gt; I think I&#039;ve heard a few months too.  Hmmm, you see that just doesn&#039;t work in with my plans, lol!  Maybe I&#039;ll commit to two months, and dedicate that time to reading a few really great books to up my game.

Everybody&#039;s doing Wii Fit!  I&#039;m gonna have to see about getting one of those!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><b>Mao,</b> I definitely feel more motivated with a good solid plan.  It&#8217;s like giving myself an assignment or something.  I can&#8217;t keep myself accountable otherwise.</p>
<p>What is it with these men and their stripper poles? <img src='http://lauraraeamos.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p><b>Carnaxa,</b> I think I&#8217;ve heard a few months too.  Hmmm, you see that just doesn&#8217;t work in with my plans, lol!  Maybe I&#8217;ll commit to two months, and dedicate that time to reading a few really great books to up my game.</p>
<p>Everybody&#8217;s doing Wii Fit!  I&#8217;m gonna have to see about getting one of those!</p>
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		<title>By: carnaxa</title>
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		<dc:creator>carnaxa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 01:40:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve read it&#039;s best to let a novel sit for a few months after you finish it and tackle it again when you&#039;re not so close to it. I let my finished draft sit for a year and when I started to read it again recently, I realised that I still think the story works but it needs more editing and some rearranging. In Chapter One alone, I cut out half of the scenes and rewrote at least 60% of it. It&#039;s much snappier and tighter now.

I got the Wii Fit for christmas so I&#039;m hoping to start that up in the next day or two to get rid of all that christmas excess I stacked on! 

I&#039;m sending you good vibes and much luck for the novel completion and edit.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve read it&#8217;s best to let a novel sit for a few months after you finish it and tackle it again when you&#8217;re not so close to it. I let my finished draft sit for a year and when I started to read it again recently, I realised that I still think the story works but it needs more editing and some rearranging. In Chapter One alone, I cut out half of the scenes and rewrote at least 60% of it. It&#8217;s much snappier and tighter now.</p>
<p>I got the Wii Fit for christmas so I&#8217;m hoping to start that up in the next day or two to get rid of all that christmas excess I stacked on! </p>
<p>I&#8217;m sending you good vibes and much luck for the novel completion and edit.</p>
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		<title>By: Mao</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mao</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jan 2010 17:53:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wishing you the best of luck with this!  I am a bit of a planner, too, so I definitely love that you&#039;ve outlined your steps.  Hopefully it will help keep you motivated during the long haul!

I am also definitely looking into the shred... would make a nice addition to my belly dancing videos.  Draw the line at putting a stripper pole in the living room, though.  Husband was saddened, LOL!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wishing you the best of luck with this!  I am a bit of a planner, too, so I definitely love that you&#8217;ve outlined your steps.  Hopefully it will help keep you motivated during the long haul!</p>
<p>I am also definitely looking into the shred&#8230; would make a nice addition to my belly dancing videos.  Draw the line at putting a stripper pole in the living room, though.  Husband was saddened, LOL!</p>
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		<title>By: Laura</title>
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		<dc:creator>Laura</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jan 2010 16:06:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Melissa, thanks for the vibes! :)  I&#039;m glad to hear it&#039;s worked for someone before.  I know that when editors/agents look at a novel, they know within the first 100 pages if it&#039;s going to work or not, so I figure it makes sense to get feedback at this point before (or while) carrying on with the rest.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Melissa, thanks for the vibes! <img src='http://lauraraeamos.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   I&#8217;m glad to hear it&#8217;s worked for someone before.  I know that when editors/agents look at a novel, they know within the first 100 pages if it&#8217;s going to work or not, so I figure it makes sense to get feedback at this point before (or while) carrying on with the rest.</p>
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		<title>By: Melissa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Melissa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jan 2010 15:51:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Laura~! A former friend of mine was in the process of writing a novel when I knew him.  He actually handed out biz cards to the website where he published to for the first 100 pages, he collected feedback for 1 month, then revised for 1 month (or 2, not sure :/) 

I&#039;m happy for you to have set a goal~! I&#039;ll be sending free flowing thought vibes your way. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Laura~! A former friend of mine was in the process of writing a novel when I knew him.  He actually handed out biz cards to the website where he published to for the first 100 pages, he collected feedback for 1 month, then revised for 1 month (or 2, not sure :/) </p>
<p>I&#8217;m happy for you to have set a goal~! I&#8217;ll be sending free flowing thought vibes your way. <img src='http://lauraraeamos.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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